Thursday, March 8, 2012

Wickedly Blessed


The wayward painted wickedly with his mind
Evident in the nature of weird stiff forms
He wandered off  in shadows of designs

The wayward painted wickedly with his mind
Pitching its right in the wealth of creation
Emblazoned hues of kaleidoscopic  abundance

The wayward painted wickedly with his mind
Evident in the nature of weird stiff forms 

Submitted for d'Verse FormForAll - Triolet 

17 comments:

  1. ha nice hank...this to me captures well the mind of the artist...the shadows of designs and wealth of creation...nice...

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  2. As Brian noted, a good evocation of the artistic sensibility.

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  3. Ah, the wicked mind of the painter, how well it fits this - and many another bill! Well done.

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  4. From the elation of the mind
    Comes the creation one will find

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  5. Got to hand it to you, the weirdness comes out, even in this traditional form. nice job using it to depict a different state of consciousnesd.

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  6. I used to spend a lot of time in the art world! Knew several painters of that ilk! K.

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  7. This is really cool, how you captured a painter in the poem. Nicely done!

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  8. The question is, though, did he paint something wicked with his brush? Ha.

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  9. ha i agree with bri and sam... love how you capture the artistic mind hank

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  10. Very original--I like the way your mind works here, Hank. It feels like you might have had something specific in mind when you wrote this--a work of art, I mean.

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  11. Hank, you have definitely mastered the form. Nice!

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  12. An interesting form, nicely written.

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  13. mind plays tricks... especially of an artist.

    Lovely read !!

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  14. Interesting. What wickedness goes on in the mind of the wayward to form such stiff abundance?

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